viernes, 26 de mayo de 2017
Thomas Alba Edison ' s
Thomas Alba Edison ' s wanted to see how elevators worked.He was always curiosity.His father found him squating in some eggs, he had replace the mother duck.His education was not very good, his mother took him from the school and took him to the home because his teachers said that he was a stupidity boy.He always loved reading chemistry books.He tried from the books many experiment.Thomas created a lab of chemistry in his home.
When his was twelve years old he wanted to buy chemicals for his experiment.But he wasn't have selling candy and newspaper.He had to stop his experiments because s stick of phosphotous fire his lab.When he was sixteen years old they gived the opportunity to be a telegraph operator and he then decide to be a electricity and chemistry.
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Agustina, your second draft is a bit better than the first but still it needs revision. He was curious, not curiosity. This sentence doesn't make much sense: "But he wasn't have selling candy and newspaper".
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